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I am a New Artist
Baphi
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Last Visit: 5 days ago
I go Rawr!
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Playing: Damnit... lots. The World Ends With You mainly.
Eating: Bagels (a little bit ago)
Drinking: Water
I have been drawing! Really! I've been doing the whole 'draw one thing a day' thing, most days anyway. I'm still just practice-learning though so I guess I'll post a doodle compilation or somethin'. Since I need more here. :\ I'll get better this year, since last year I kinda stopped drawing for 6 months. Gogo motivation!
Aha~ x.x; To be honest that was an accidental click, your stories aren't really what I would usually read.
However! You do have talent writing, and I did enjoy reading some of your poems, although the content isn't for me. I'm not great at writing criticism, all I can say is try to mix up your vocab more. You clearly know words, but sometimes I feel you're not picking them well, and simply sticking to ones you like to use.
Haha, don't even worry about it. I just prefer dark and morbid things to happy kittens and rainbows, you know? I'm hoping to find a middle ground eventually. Or at least, make one that isn't so dark for a change. I know some words but I've always had a bit of a limited vocabulary. Which is mostly caused by the fact that I have such a horrible memory. I just stick to what I know but I also try to expand them from time to time. I know that one of the biggest problems with writers is repeating themselves. I want to create something that is not stale and paints a vivid picture in one's head. I'm far from that however. Ah well. Thanks for the feedback even if you accidentally favorite'd something you weren't into.
tbh
Distracted
<3
However! You do have talent writing, and I did enjoy reading some of your poems, although the content isn't for me.
I'm not great at writing criticism, all I can say is try to mix up your vocab more. You clearly know words, but sometimes I feel you're not picking them well, and simply sticking to ones you like to use.
Uber art! I'm watching you! >'D
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